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The Archmage



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 PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 5:56 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

I really like the story...with or without violence.

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"Now where did I put my spellbook?..."
 
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BOB emperor of mongolia



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Location: Punakaiki, West Coast, South Island, New Zealand, MonBOBlia

 PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 8:27 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

quote:
Originally posted by TaleSpinner:


I'll try to incorporate one in the next chapter - promise



Thank you Mongolia is grateful for your wise decision and promises not to unleash the power of the mongolian tree eating frogs
(in case you haven't noticed I have this thing about shovels, trees, violence and mongolia [Preferably in the same sentence])

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Its me and my mongolian tree eating shovel against the universe (unless I run out of coffee hehehe ;Ŝ)
ŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻ
 
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silly toy



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 PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 2:51 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

how about some way to get back at her

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I follow you, i lead you about a round,
through bog, through bush through brake, through brier:
Sometimes a horse I'll be , some times a hound,
A hog a headless bear, sometimes a fire;
And neigh, and bark, and grunt, and roar, and burn
Like horse, hound, hog, bear, fire, at every turn
 
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TaleSpinner



Joined: 08 Sep 2000
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Location: Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

 PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 8:03 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

silly toy, wasn't actually thinking of letting Lydith meet Sharielle again till much, much later - when they are fully fledged priestesses and paladins respectively.

Well, here it is - Chapter 3 with the first fight scene in the book. Since this chapter has graphic violence, and a shovel, I dedicate this chapter to BOB

Enjoy the read!

 
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Apple



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 PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 9:35 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Does Gameth have a shield?
 
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TaleSpinner



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 PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 9:43 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Interesting question. I keep forgetting that warriors would block arrows with a shield

But anyway - no harm done, the post doesn't state that there wasn't a shield or that if it was ready for use.

Thanks for reading as well, Apple. You tend to give constructive comments

 
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BOB emperor of mongolia



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 PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 6:11 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Hahahahahahaha Portable shovels, blood, violence, goblins....I love it

I am flattered by your dedication and look forward to whatever uses you put the shovels to

and may I offer the blessings of BOB god of all hippie shovels (not to be confused with BOB emperor of mongolia or BOB the presidential candidate or BOB mutant king of mogolia and high hippie priest of BOB or BOB the potato or BOB *whack* I'll shut up now ) btw vote BOB for God in 2004.....uh....sorry got a bit sidetracked there *official sounding voice*please keep the patient away from all sharp objects and please remove any yellow, green, purple metal, edible objects that you might be carrying or he will begin to have severe fits

Thats all from the land of mongolian tree dwelling tomato flavoured lightbulbs

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Its me and my tree eating shovel pig against anything that might possibly be able to move
(and anything that cant for that matter)
ŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻŻ
If it moves... kill it
if it doesn't...kill it anyway
(Quote from BOB commander in chief of the armies of Mongolia)
 
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TaleSpinner



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 PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 9:12 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Okay, another post to last for the next few days.

Anyway, I'd like to wish everyone a Happy Chinese New Year - I'll be off for the New Year holidays till next week - so you'll all have to hang on till then.

Cheers, and hope you have enjoyed the story so far!
 
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bladeles



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 PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 10:55 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Heh heh heh... 'you're losing your edge, Sir Ironedge'... I love it

Enjoy the holiday!

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TaleSpinner



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 PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 5:36 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Needless to say, I think I was pretty hungry when I wrote out that first bit of the post

Anyway, back to the writing board and hope to be writing and posting at full steam. The story is growing longer than expected, so I hope the expansion doesn't come out when I'm finished

For the blood-thristy ones, I'm sorry to say that I'm not really up the writing about blood and violence these few days, so you'll have to endure a bit of plot-planning

Cheers, and thanks for reading!
 
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silly toy



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 PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 1:12 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

keep up the good work

hay bob what are you on and where can i ge some

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I follow you, i lead you about a round,
through bog, through bush through brake, through brier:
Sometimes a horse I'll be , some times a hound,
A hog a headless bear, sometimes a fire;
And neigh, and bark, and grunt, and roar, and burn
Like horse, hound, hog, bear, fire, at every turn
 
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silly toy



Joined: 18 Jan 2001
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 PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 1:07 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

plot twist plot twist plot twist
cool

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I follow you, i lead you about a round,
through bog, through bush through brake, through brier:
Sometimes a horse I'll be , some times a hound,
A hog a headless bear, sometimes a fire;
And neigh, and bark, and grunt, and roar, and burn
Like horse, hound, hog, bear, fire, at every turn
 
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Falotar



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 PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2001 9:09 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

You could introduce into the story that Gameth lost his shield during one of his adventures and never bothered to replace it. Just a passing thought on my account.

[This message has been edited by Falotar (edited 16 February 2001).]
 
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TaleSpinner



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 PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2001 3:09 am    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Ah well, at least writer's block hasn't set in yet

That's an idea about Gameth's shield. Maybe it'll be a topic of conversation sometime in the future

Thanks for your comments - they really help spur the creative juices into working!
 
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TaleSpinner



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 PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 8:11 pm    Post subject: about Daughter of Krypta Reply with quote Back to top

Just realised that this section about Tomas should have come in before the post about Lydith reaching Necroselleum because it took place the night before. But anyway, it doesn't screw anything up - but just thought I'd like to clarify it

Got my wife to proof-read this post, and by the end of it, she got confused over that last line about priestesses not being the only ones to raise the dead. So just in case anyone else gets confused - the last line is just Tomas implying that he's going to bring back his old identity "back from the dead". Okay?

Thank you to everyone reading my story - it's getting rather long, so I'm planning to start the next chapter in a new topic.

Cheers, and happy reading!
 
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