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Sorotor
Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 283
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:17 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. It's nice to know that somebody's reading htis.
Oh, and sorry for the chaotic writing. I don't feel I'm doing as well as I might. |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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let's get this finished with
1 grande finale, coming up. |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:26 am Post subject: |
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Demonic is technically grey, but it doesn't stand out as well as black, so I use black instead. I am Sorry for gross violation of the language code.
if you need any of it rewritten, I will be happy to comply. |
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Sorotor
Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 283
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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And there you have it. Amaru's master plan.
Cooker wrote: |
Demonic is technically grey, but it doesn't stand out as well as black, so I use black instead. I am Sorry for gross violation of the language code.
if you need any of it rewritten, I will be happy to comply. |
Ah, I haven't been using the code myself, so who am I to quibble? As for rewriting, Mayhew proper is still in ruins, but that's not really a problem as I understand the wraith is assaulting the entire area. |
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Sorotor
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 8:18 pm Post subject: |
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Emarius had better distract evil Alexandra fast, or else something worse will come of it. Xyra is already more powerful than before, and of a different kind. The evil spirit is trying to drain his life, but Xyra can now absorb and transform all energy into his own. This is exactly what he intends to do in regards to his assailant. As they both try to absorb the other, being of nearly equal strength, what will eventually happen is that they will fuse. And that will not be good. So, keep them apart by all means. |
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Will the Spellcaster

Joined: 29 Apr 2002 Posts: 499 Location: Somewhere that I teleported too...  |
Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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Sorotor wrote: |
Emarius had better distract evil Alexandra fast, or else something worse will come of it. Xyra is already more powerful than before, and of a different kind. The evil spirit is trying to drain his life, but Xyra can now absorb and transform all energy into his own. This is exactly what he intends to do in regards to his assailant. As they both try to absorb the other, being of nearly equal strength, what will eventually happen is that they will fuse. And that will not be good. So, keep them apart by all means. |
Yikes... _________________ WizKid |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 2:58 am Post subject: |
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A star wars theme plays in the background.
I can barely picture the sheer intensity and insanity of the draconic attack. So I described it as well as I could. The nemesis is distracted for now, but far from beaten. Only Agrela stand any chance so she might want to do something. Krolm want the dragons dead but he might not want his own creation to perish with them.
You might have noticed the whole Ardanian economy has being producing something all these time right, here you go just when you thought raining frogs and fish were bad.
Xyra and his forces have now being pushed into the city/ruin proper. Hope that was enough of a light show for the story to continue :p |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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Fabulariax's move
All attacks on time and on target.
Harbingers (Jedis ?) should have pretty hard fight against all the mutated stuff in that town, but they should have a good chance of pulling it off. |
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Sorotor
Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 283
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:37 am Post subject: |
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By the by, if anybody read my last post I suggest you read it again. I added quite a lot via edit. |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 3:13 am Post subject: |
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that was very good  |
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Cooker

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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:10 am Post subject: |
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hope that was good enough
proof-reading later.
private message away. |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:49 am Post subject: |
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Barbarains still don't like dragons right ?
How would that strategy work ? I am waiting, and am amused.
All pieces of puzzle has came together at last.
Well except maybe one inside the temple  |
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Sorotor
Joined: 01 Apr 2005 Posts: 283
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 12:07 am Post subject: |
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Just two more conflicts for me to write. I think I'll do the Agrela/Nemesis one first -- i want Xyra's death to be the end of the story. But not now. Now, it's time for bed.
Last edited by Sorotor on Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:15 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 12:09 am Post subject: |
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Thanks :D
i will write a bit more to hopefully inspire you.
hope i don't end up counterproductive |
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Cooker

Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1710
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, let's finish this.
i think this story is longer then the original 1001Ardanian Nights. But without counting length of each I cannot be entirely sure.
We have gone a LONG way  |
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